Friday, May 18, 2012

World Building on Earth with Chaeya

Please welcome a good friend and fabulous guest author Chaeya! 

She'll be giving away one free ebook copy and one free print copy of her latest release, Srae Iss-Ka-Mala, to two lucky commenters, so leave a comment to enter to win!


Most people hear the term "world-building" and they immediately think of other planets or dimensions. However, you don't have to be a fantasy or sci-fi buff to appreciate the art of world-building right here in third dimensional, planet Earth.

World-building occurs in every story regardless of the genre because it not only creates the setting and backdrop for your story, but it can also be used as a tool to further describe your characters. As people, we are all walking universes unto ourselves. Our world involves the city we live in, our workplace, the street our homes are located, and our home itself. Imagine your favorite movie and how the setting can seem almost a fantasy contained in its own world. Movies set in small towns have a knack of doing just this, and can sometimes seem the only place existing on Earth.

What we can learn from these movies is how authors can utilize the following elements to imbue more life into your stories and characters. A writer can relay much of the characters' personalities just by how they are placed in the scenery. So, in essence, building an effective world can participate in character development, resulting in less telling and more showing.

The City. I know we have continents, countries, and states, but to make it less complicated, I'll focus on cities. The city where your story takes place is the universe of your story. It is the cosmos of all those walking stars that populate it. Whether it be a small town or big city, the description will create the backdrop of your story. For instance, if you want a dark setting, you'd want to focus on the color gray and the mass of concrete, etc. If it's winter, you could describe the grit-covered snow in the gutters and parks filled with pale grass and leafless trees. Perhaps people pass by one another facing forward and not interacting. When they bump into someone, they don't pardon themselves. This sounds like a real hospitable place, doesn't it? NOT.

The Workplace and The Home. I would call a job or home the galaxy of your story, depending upon how much they feature in the setting and plot. Work tends to be a more popular setting than home. You can tell a lot about a character or characters simply from the décor of their office. I've worked in the corporate world for over 25 years, and I've been in many different types of offices. Is it a small dump filled with second-hand office furniture two decades late? This sounds like the firm is either cheap, or running on a shoestring budget. To describe a character's office as having rich, cherry wood panels, a big executive desk, and a wall filled with awards and degrees might portray a man as being successful, intelligent, and maybe a bit arrogant. One of the attorneys I work for has a row of little wind-up toys on his desk, signifying his playful nature; while another has a paper pile two feet deep on his desk and the floor surrounding it. He also has a sign taped to the wall for the cleaning crew that reads: Don't touch my mess! Everything I've written here can be used to describe a character's home, and applied in the same fashion.

Your Characters. Not many people mention characters as part of world-building, but they are an essential part of it. They are the suns, the planets, and the moons in your galaxy and your universe. Everything they wear, what they see, and how they interact with things and people around them participates in creating and completing the world you see that you wish to bring across to your readers. How does your heroine walk down the city's street? Does she look around at what's going on about her, or does she look down when she walks? If she looks down and walks slow, maybe she's depressed, or maybe she's an oddball who likes to see if she can find loose change on the ground. Does she fall in line with everyone else walking around her, or does she hang in the back, away from everyone else? These things can show the reader more about your characters' personalities.

It's true that people don't want to be bogged down with too much detail; however, all you need are a few sentences to get your point across. I’m sure many of you as writers know all of these elements and how to employ them; I only wish to give you another way of looking at world-building and some tricks on how to apply them to areas where you are challenged. By changing the way I looked at world-building and how to apply it to my own writing, I was able to be more patient in areas I wasn’t too fond of working on, such as time, place, and setting. It also allows me to plot better, when I decide to work on my universe or galaxy. However, let’s not forget the most important feature of world-building and that is: have fun.

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Chaeya is a storyteller, songwriter, musician, poet, and all around daydream believer. When she isn't being domestic with her husband and two daughters, she fancies herself the Empress of Ev*A*Dream as the leader of the band "Chaeya and Her Dark Secret." She performs often around Southern California.




Thursday, May 17, 2012

Reconnecting With a Former Life


This past weekend I had an opportunity to take a trip down memory lane and I took 2/3 of my triplets along for kicks. A family friend was being sworn into the National Guard so we drove up to the National base at Camp Dodge in Des Moines to witness the proud moment.

I also had an ulterior motive. You see, I attended the Iowa Department of Public Safety Academy at Camp Dodge when I became a Iowa State Trooper. I'd never had the opportunity to take the kids to see where I went through my peace officer training way back when. You know. Brag a little bit. Show the offspring where I lived, where I ran in formation, (where I puked out of formation), where the obstacle course was located (the one with the wall from hell you had to get over in order to complete training, etc.) So we took some time to wander around and after I pointed out the landmarks associated with fourteen weeks of sheer unadulterated fear and profound discomfort, we found ourselves in the Gold Star Museum which houses, among tons of military artifacts and weaponry, a room dedicated to the men and women of the Iowa State Patrol.

Okay, so I don't remember any female troopers as tall as the one pictured with yours truly above, and my hair sure wasn't anywhere near this short, but I certainly remember wearing that uniform--and wearing it  proudly.

Often when we go back and revisit places that had a profound impact in our lives we go through "what if" moments:  What if I'd stayed on the patrol until I retired? What would my life have been like? Would my life have been better? Worse? Or maybe just.. different?

From the patrol I went to the Iowa Department of Justice and became a consumer fraud investigator. From there, I became the mother of triplets. And eventually...an author. An author who has an awfully good time writing about horses and whodunnits, cowgirls, cops, and crime.

What's one of your most touching "memory lane moments"? What, if anything did you learn by looking back? 

Me? I learned that once a trooper always a trooper--in some form or another at least.

I still work in a related field. And I'm still proud as can be that I was--once upon a time--a brown shirt.

Wednesday, May 16, 2012

The Zone

So yesterday I had the coolest writing session - I basically forgot about everything but the story for hours. It doesn't always happen that way, to get in the zone, and it was a lot of fun. And it started me thinking about my brother and how when he runs, he gets into that same kind of rhythm, where you forget were you are and just focus on the moment. It's a neat place to be.

I only wish I could do it while running. My latest attempts at getting ready for the Run for Your Lives Zombie 5k basically consist of me, half-bent over and panting after the first mile, then making deals with myself to finish the next half-mile, then walking the rest. Afterward, I complain to my husband and tell him how hard it is and he tells me how he ran five miles every morning when he was in the army.


Show off.


But I do hear that with dedication, practice and love (that last one will never happen with me on a track), it is possible to find a running zone. Maybe some day it will all click. In the mean time, I'll stick to writing.

Tuesday, May 15, 2012

Emptying the Nest...


By Robin 'Red Hot' Kaye



Last weekend my son, Tony went to his Senior Prom. I was at Starbucks working with my critique partners at Starbucks when my husband and one of our daughters joined us to meet up with my son and his date so I could see them and take pictures before they left for dinner and the prom.

Tony’s date looked beautiful, and my son looked so handsome and grown up, it almost made me cry. We waved goodbye to the kids and my husband took out his phone and started scrolling through Tony’s baby pictures he’d recently downloaded. Tony is almost nineteen and when I saw the pictures of him at a day old, I couldn’t believe he’d grown up so fast. I remembered when people would tell me he’d be grown and gone in a blink-of-an-eye. I didn’t believe it, but it’s true. How did that happen? Tony will graduate high school next month, and in early August we’ll make the trip from Maryland to Boise, Idaho where he’s going to college at Boise State. Go Broncos! Knowing Tony, except for a few holiday visits, he’ll never be back—not really.

I feel as if I’m living in a whirlwind and the summer that has yet to begin is already flying by. Between my writing deadlines—revisions, a graduation party to plan with family coming in from out-of-town, a book due a month from today, planning a family cross-country trip/vacation to Boise, and the thought of my oldest living 2,800 miles away from home, I’ve been feeling as grounded as a fart in the wind. There is too much to do, too much to plan, too much to worry about, and too much to savor before it ends.

I never thought I’d be one of those women with empty nest syndrome. I’d swear I’d be that mom on the commercial who tearfully waves her kid goodbye, goes back into the house, and is dancing for joy and redecorating his bedroom within minutes. Now I’m beginning to wonder. I guess it’s a good thing I still have two hormonal teenage girls to drop kick out of the nest. After dealing with them for the next three years, by the time my youngest goes, I’m sure my husband and I will be doing the Macarena and packing for a trip to somewhere spectacular just in case they decide to come back!

How about you? If you’ve already launched your children, was it difficult? And if you haven’t, how do you think you’ll react when it’s time to cut the apron strings? Any advice, words of comfort, encouragement?  


Monday, May 14, 2012

Why?

Does Monday come around so quickly? Seriously, I think someone stole some days from me.

First up today, new business. The Killer Fiction Writers now have a Facebook page!

Let's face it, it's almost impossible to keep up with everything going on Internet wise and we know most of our dedicated following are techno-savvy and using Facebook. We figured it would be far easier for you to remember us if we're showing up in your feed. So please head over and Like our page. We'll link to blog posts and be available to answer questions from readers. We're hoping the more casual format makes interaction with you easier.

Second up, I finished my new mystery series book!!!!! I can't tell you how long I've been putting this project off to write other contracted books, and am so happy to finally finish. It's out with critique partners now, then will be revised and visit an editor, then I'll be releasing it to the world. :)

Third up, I saw The Avengers on Saturday and it was fabulous! Just the right blend of action, plot, character development and humor. I love when humor is added to essentially non-humorous movies. It's well worth the time and money.

Fourth up, my vacation was wonderful but WAY too short. Isn't that how it always is?

So what about you? Seen a good movie lately? I'm really wanting to see Dark Shadows. Did you do anything special for Mother's Day? Planning a vacation?

Deadly DeLeon

Friday, May 11, 2012

Pointe is available for the NOOK!

The long-awaited day is finally here! The second YA book in my Dani Spevak Mystery Series, Pointe of No Return, is now available exclusively for the NOOK! And there is much dancing and shouting through the land!

Or at least in my house.

Seriously though, I'm uber-excited, because B&N chose this book as for their NOOK First program. B&N chooses 8 books per month for this program, and mine will be one of the 4 spotlighted starting on Monday. Cool, huh?

As a result, I agreed not to make the book available in any other format or from any other retailer until June 13. So print readers and Kindle owners, you'll just have to wait. Sorry!

But here's what the book is about:

Aspiring ballerina Dani Spevak’s visions of sugar plums are dashed when she’s assigned to understudy her nemesis, Hadley Taylor, in the Nutcracker. Pretty, popular, and rich, that girl has all the luck. Or so she thought.

When Hadley mysteriously disappears with opening night just around the corner, Dani can’t sit idly by, even if it means losing the part. Now she’s running all over Phoenix in a race against the clock. From reality TV trophy wives to sleazy real estate developers to a possible drug ring, the cast of suspects begins to add up. Will she find Hadley before the curtain rises?

“From the authentic atmosphere of a ballet boarding school to the recognizable humor and angst of teenage girls, POINTE OF NO RETURN hits all the right notes and kept me turning the pages.”
- Former professional ballerina Miriam Landis-Wenger, author of GIRL IN MOTION and BREAKING POINTE

"POINTE OF NO RETURN had me anxiously watching the mystery unfold. Amanda Brice provides a fresh voice and bouncy writing style that will have you entertained from the get-go."
- Marley Gibson, author of the popular GHOST HUNTRESS series and RADIATE

Sound good? Leave a comment no later than Mother's Day at noon EST (Sunday, May 13, 2012) and you'll be entered to win one of 3 copies in the e-book format of your choice. This is the only way to get a non-NOOK version before June 13!

Tell your friends!

Thursday, May 10, 2012

WHEN WRITERS DON’T THINK THINGS THROUGH…

First a little note from Kyra Davis: New York Times bestselling author, Alina Adams is a close personal friend and a bit of a mentor of mine. She's published romances, mysteries, non-fiction figure skating books, soap opera tie-in books and now enhanced ebooks (ebooks that include videos). She also produces enhanced ebooks for other authors.. Oh and she's a blogger,  a mother of three and a regular contributor to Mommy Poppins. In other words, she's busy. But she still had time to write a guest blog for us here. So without further ado: Alina Adams:


I realize that a Happily Ever After is mandatory.  Hey, I like a Happily Ever After as well as the next girl.  (Though, with one of my books, “Annie’s Wild Ride,” there was a rather vigorous debate on-line as to whether my hero and heroine would be able to stick it out for the long haul.  My personal feeling?  No.  Sorry.)

But, here’s the thing.  If I’ve just invested three hundred pages into falling in love with a couple, I want to know what happens post-Happily Ever After.  (I.e. I came for the wedding and brought a nice gift.  Why can’t I come on the honeymoon, too?)

I suspect my desire for seeing the story continue comes from thirty years of watching soaps.  And almost twenty years of working in them.  I started at ABC Daytime, then moved over to As the World Turns and Guiding Light.  I produced the official websites and wrote tie-in novels like “Oakdale Confidential,” “The Man From Oakdale,” and “Jonathan’s Story” (with Julia London). 

And I dealt with the fans.  On Message Boards, through e-mail, at Fan Club Events.  And here is what I learned: Fans have very strong opinions about what they want to happen next with their favorite characters.  And their ideas aren’t bad.  (Also, their ideas are wildly divergent.  For everyone who loves A with B, there’s someone who loves A with C.  Not to be confused with those who love C with B.  Or those who think all three are getting way too much airtime over D, E and F.)

In 2009, while still at P&G Productions, I developed a property called www.AnotherWorldToday.com, a twice-weekly serial where, at the end, the readers got to vote on what they wanted to see happen next.

It was a fascinating process to watch.  Not only was there no such thing as a landslide win for any poll, but some would literally flip-flop for days between 49% percent pro and 51% con, and vice versa.  (Seriously the 2000 presidential election was less contested.)

This basically meant that, whatever I ultimately did, half my audience would be unhappy with the result.  There’s no business like show business, I guess!

Knowing this going in, I did what any self-destructive (er, I meant self-respecting, I’m sure) writer with hopes of a long-term, successful career would do: I created my own original book series, putting the power of plotting into the hands of my readers.  (I also prayed a lot and wondered what the hell I was thinking.)

Counterpoint: An Interactive Family Saga (Volume One)” is currently out on Amazon.  At the end, there are links to click (God, I love technology) for readers to express their opinions about what should happen next.  When “Counterpoint: An Interactive Family Saga (Volume Two)” is released next month, their suggestions will be incorporated.  And so on into Volume Three.  And Four.  And…

How hard could that be?

Write a book a month, taking into consideration wildly different opinions, while keeping everyone equally happy.

Yup.  I think I meant self-destructive, after all.


Alina Adams is the New York Times’ best selling author of soap opera tie-ins, figure skating mysteries, and romances, including Annie’s Wild Ride and When a Man Loves a Woman.  Her latest project is Counterpoint: An Interactive Family Saga.  In addition to turning her own backlist into enhanced e-books, she has produced enhanced e-books for others, including Dan Elish, whose middle-grade fantasy novel, The Worldwide Dessert Contest, now includes its own original musical score.  Learn more at http://www.AlinaAdamsMedia.com